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Seeking feedback on opt-in page copy
Hi everyone- looking for some feedback a new opt-in page copy for my business in the Paleo niche. I had this business *barely* up and running in 2020 before the pandemic hit. WIth the demise of Launchpad I am now rebuilding, hopefully better. Any input will be greatly appreciated!
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Lurn Ambassador
Concise wording without being too salesy, it might be better to shorten
Take immediate control to quickly and easily drop those unsightly pounds and look and feel like a kid again!
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Take immediate control to drop those unsightly pounds and look and feel like a kid again!
Also, I assume this opt-in page is simply to collect email addresses, right? The free report is what they get to give that to you. The opt-in page is not what sells, it will be your free report.
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Lurn Achiever
Yes, just list building. Thanks! I agree – simpler is better….
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